tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post7110182004644638078..comments2023-10-10T14:19:02.858+05:30Comments on Snatches of Sanity: A StoryAduhi Chawngthuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-1261019093364912202009-05-15T06:40:00.000+05:302009-05-15T06:40:00.000+05:30novel te zawng a la hla lutuk, short story ah ka l...novel te zawng a la hla lutuk, short story ah ka la in ham buai vel mek anih hiAduhi Chawngthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-90660326527102489352009-05-14T15:15:00.000+05:302009-05-14T15:15:00.000+05:30hets, novels i ziak a maw..tha lutuk, i publish da...hets, novels i ziak a maw..tha lutuk, i publish dawnah min lo hrilh ve rawh aw..ka lei nghal hrim hrim. Acknowledgment ah ka hming ka zawng nghal ang...;)EPISTEMOLOGYhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04974270303370519990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-3450910712167762792009-05-14T07:20:00.000+05:302009-05-14T07:20:00.000+05:30luliana - thank you. Chemkalna loh tur a awm emi l...luliana - thank you. Chemkalna loh tur a awm emi le, ziak ve chhin la.Aduhi Chawngthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-38623009167487868072009-05-14T03:13:00.000+05:302009-05-14T03:13:00.000+05:30Ka ni pasal hi Mizoram Upa Pawl General secretary....Ka ni pasal hi Mizoram Upa Pawl General secretary...lolzzz<br /><br />I ziak thiam khop mai. Ka chem kal lohna lam a ni bawk a han sawisel tur pawh ka hre chuang lo :)lulianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00055765023315113407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-66228843828309976082009-05-11T19:22:00.001+05:302009-05-11T19:22:00.001+05:30Vana - tluang deuh khan i zin dawn nia, khawlum tu...Vana - tluang deuh khan i zin dawn nia, khawlum tuar nuam le.Aduhi Chawngthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-44716835545494632012009-05-11T19:22:00.000+05:302009-05-11T19:22:00.000+05:30dear diary - Yep. Went ahead and dived in. I'm not...dear diary - Yep. Went ahead and dived in. I'm not going to tell you how the characters are going to develop, you'll have to come back and see :) And thank you for the encouragement.Aduhi Chawngthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-64760282375449287192009-05-11T19:19:00.000+05:302009-05-11T19:19:00.000+05:30J-Ditto here, I mean with the Mizo fiction with sa...J-Ditto here, I mean with the Mizo fiction with sap storyline. It just doesnt click. That's why I chose to go with something I know very well and something I can relate to.<br /><br />Yes I will focus more on the characters. I know an interesting character makes the story come alive, even if the storyline has not much to offer. Maybe I should take online lit lessons from you :)Aduhi Chawngthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-10727993820228096262009-05-11T17:43:00.000+05:302009-05-11T17:43:00.000+05:30A va han fakawm tak, mi taima tan chuan hlawhtlinn...A va han fakawm tak, mi taima tan chuan hlawhtlinna a awm. Ka chhiar ang, ka zin ka haw hunah :). TCvanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14516583176156571949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-36424147281422205562009-05-11T16:03:00.000+05:302009-05-11T16:03:00.000+05:30So you went and did it. I think it's going to make...So you went and did it. I think it's going to make easy reading, obviously the characters are going to become even more defined as the story progresses, but we are already getting an inkling of how they're going to be like even in the first chapter. Good luck with the rest :)diaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02963484333197068001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-53651253305348844382009-05-11T09:54:00.000+05:302009-05-11T09:54:00.000+05:30Hey that's great, ambs. I checked your story and I...Hey that's great, ambs. I checked your story and I like the Mizo milieu. The in thing in lit. is multi-culturalism and it always makes my skin crawl reading Mizo written fiction of sap characters with sap names doing sap things. Very infantile that. There are lots of human experiences that are universal and which other ppl of other cultures can relate to like love, pain, etc and you've got that right on the button, clap clap. <br /><br />Also I've always found dialogues devilishly difficult to write but you don't seem to have a problem with it. Just try to make sure your different characters sound different and individualistic. Like we all have our distinctive ways of speaking, talking, expressing ourselves etc and that should be true of fictional characters as well. Not necessarily in an overt way but in small subtle ways. Characterisation is one thing we study a lot of in lit. classes and it's one of the things that differentiates a lit. piece from hmmmm this has something to yucks, what trash!Calliopiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15291737369959906567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-69937098945132591402009-05-10T19:05:00.000+05:302009-05-10T19:05:00.000+05:30lol yeah I remember those Mizo dramas, especially ...lol yeah I remember those Mizo dramas, especially the ones that used to come on radio, read/acted in that straight level tone without any emotions (Eee ka nu lungngai reng reng suh kan dam anga Pathian in ei tur chu min pe em em ang etc etc).<br /><br />I'll work on the characters a bit more. I'll not make any changes now, but the other chapters will be more descriptive. Thanks for the feedback.Aduhi Chawngthuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09354958246245503600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3003789140418467794.post-35409501264394771732009-05-10T18:45:00.000+05:302009-05-10T18:45:00.000+05:30Good start.. hope there's more coming.. Keep it up...Good start.. hope there's more coming.. Keep it up..<br />Here's my two cents tho':<br />Not that I know a lot about stoary writing, but I was expecting a description of the characters, cos' it kinda made me feel like I'm reading a drama script instead of a story.. (But not in the Mizo kinda drama where it goes like: <br />"Hei Kan lo leng aa..."<br />"EE! Nangni in ni maw.. lo leng ta che u..."<br />"Nia.. kan lo leng e.. ".. lolzz )<br />BTW.. I like the way they interrupt their sentences, makes it seem real.. <br />PS: Get some more guys in the story.. heheAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com